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Public feedback · Linked source · Illustrative example
Landing-page feedback you can check at the source.
This page separates a public feedback exchange from an illustrative coaching-page example. Neither is presented as a measured conversion result or a paid customer case.
What this page documents: Free public suggestions are different from the current paid Brand Clarity Audit. Completed client results will be added only with supporting evidence and permission.
EXAMPLE 01 · PUBLIC FEEDBACK
PostDew: five free landing-page suggestions
Manish Bhusal, founder of PostDew · Public Indie Hackers discussion
The exchange
BeginThings offered five free suggestions. Manish thanked the author and said he intended to implement them.
Read the public exchange on Indie Hackers.
Topics covered
- Headline contrast.
- Consistent positioning.
- Beta messaging.
- Hero CTA placement.
- Social proof.
Evidence boundary
This exchange records suggestions and stated intent. It does not establish completed changes, a paid audit, a rating, or conversion or revenue lift.
The current paid audit, separately
Deliverable: One primary landing page, 10 prioritized findings in a private PDF, with replacement wording where relevant.
Turnaround: 2–3 working days after complete intake.
Price: ₹999 for the current Brand Clarity Audit.
Scope: Written recommendations; website implementation is not included.
EXAMPLE 02 · ILLUSTRATIVE
The mid-career coach with the beautiful but generic landing page
Fictional coaching-page example · Not a client engagement
The pattern
This fictional example illustrates how recommendations might be framed. Its hero reads "Unlock your potential. Transform your life." The form has 9 fields, including budget upfront. Pricing is not visible, and the trust block lists certifications. These are example details, not reported customer results.
What the audit recommends
- Replace the hero with a specific outcome statement. Example direction: "I help mid-career professionals leave corporate jobs and start service businesses, without a six-month income gap."
- Cut the form to 5 fields. Move "budget range" to an optional dropdown.
- Add a starting-price anchor on the homepage. Even "from ₹X for the first session" qualifies leads before they enquire.
- Replace the certification logos with one named coachee + one specific outcome.
- Move the primary CTA above the mobile fold.
Why this isn't a named case
This example explains the format. A separate client case would require evidence of the work and explicit permission before publication.
ROADMAP
Future documented cases
Examples of future cases we may publish when work is documented and the client agrees:
- First paid Brand Clarity Audit case (when one buyer publishes results).
- First Premium Page Build case (full landing page built from scratch).
- First Brand + Funnel Setup case (a scoped implementation project).
If you take up a BeginThings service and would like your work featured here with attribution (or anonymised), let Sourav know on the kickoff email. Featured cases get a small discount on the next engagement as a thank-you.
Become a case study
Ship a Brand Clarity Audit or Page Build with BeginThings. If the work lands and you give permission, your story goes here. Discounts available for featured cases.
